First of all, Hello and welcome to the forum. 
It’s unusual to find a first-time poster studying Al Brooks - I don’t remember it, here, before.
I had a lot of “false starts” in trading, and it took me years to be able to make steady profits from it, and even more years to make a living from it. I wish I’d realised at a much earlier stage that “price action” was definitely the way for me to go: it would have saved me a [B][U]lot[/U][/B] of time. :8:
I’m now a price action trader, myself, needless to say - thanks to Al Brooks, among others.
I certainly agree that his books are far from easy going.
I’d read a few other “price action” books before getting as far as Al Brooks, and [I]still[/I] found his three textbooks pretty heavy going and had to read each of them really slowly and at least twice. I do think his [U]content[/U] is excellent, though (for those who persist with it!).
At the time, I attributed my difficulty reading Brooks mostly to the fact that English isn’t my first language, but with hindsight I no longer think that was really all that relevant, given that I managed other people’s textbooks much more easily: I now think the reality is that Brooks’ books are just badly [I]edited[/I].
(I don’t know the Persavento and Jouflas book you mentioned at all. I’ve read something by Anna Coulling, but not that one.)
If it helps you at all, I strongly recommend Bob Volman’s two books: [I]Understanding Price Action: Practical Analysis of the 5-minute Time-Frame[/I] and [I]Forex Price Action Scalping: an In-depth Look into the Field of Professional Scalping.[/I] (Don’t let the titles put you off, or imagine that the content is limited to what the titles suggest: the contents of the first book mentioned above are also very applicable to other, longer time-frames; and those of the second book - which not everyone would call “scalping” anyway - are also applicable to much slower trading than what scalpers are doing.)
Regarding “thoughts on the Al Brooks books”, all I can suggest, from my own experience, is that they’re definitely worth persisting with; but I’m wondering whether a break from them, to read Bob Volman first, might be helpful to you. Difficult to know, really! It would have been, to me, I think, if I’d tried them that way round.
(I also found Lance Beggs a very helpful author, for “price action information”.)
I also recommend Al Brooks video course (which is [B]far[/B] more approachable than his books), and have “reviewed” it here.
Good luck and good wishes - and I look forward to hearing more from you (especially about how you’re getting on!).
Lexy